Deck Log Entry # 147 The OTHER Legionnaire Who Killed (Part 3)

For the last couple of entries, we've been talking about Lightning Lad's rôle in the death of interplanetary criminal Zaryan the Conqueror.  This prompted the question from correspondent Commando Cody, "Why didn't the Legion then charge Lightning Lad with violating the club's code against killing?"

 

It's a good question, and as we shall see, Cody wasn't the first one to ask it.

 

To the point where we left off---Adventure Comics # 311 (Aug., 1963)---the Legion could not be faulted for failing to investigate Lightning Lad in the matter, as the same action had resulted in the Legionnaire's own death.  As a matter of propriety and practicality, charging Lightning Lad with breaking the code would have been pointless.

 

In fact, there is a suggestion that, had Lightning Lad lived, the super-hero club would have looked into the matter.  In “The Return of Lightning Lad”, from Adventure Comics # 308 (May, 1963), the Legionnaire appeared to have returned from the dead, but lost his super-power in the process.  As mentioned in the last session, Cosmic Boy was insistent on expelling the now-powerless Lightning Lad from the club.  This was despite whatever emotional turmoil it might have caused Garth Ranzz.

 

This implies that at least one Legionnaire would pursue other possible violations of Legion law committed by Lightning Lad.

 

The point became moot, though, when it was discovered that the “resurrected” Lighting Lad was actually his twin sister, Ayla Ranzz, posing as the slain Legionnaire.

 

Thus, through Adventure Comics # 311, Lightning Lad remained dead and beyond the reach of any disciplinary procedure.  However, in the letter column of that issue, editor Mort Weisinger, responding to a number of fans, revealed that Lightning Lad would be restored to life in the following issue.

 

 

 

THE RETURN OF THE ACCUSED TO JURISDICTION.

 

 

In “The Super-Sacrifice of the Legionnaires”, from Adventure Comics # 312 (Sep., 1963), Mon-El, who had been pretty much absent since his release from the Phantom Zone seven issues earlier, returns to Earth after searching for a means to resurrect Lightning Lad.  He reports to his hopeful fellow Legionnaires that he has failed.  Even the great biologists of his home world, Daxam, were unable to provide a means to bring the dead back to life.

 

Or so Mon-El tells them.

 

Mon and the others travel to a deserted world with an atmosphere that constantly discharges bolts of lightning.  Here is where Lightning Lad’s transparent sarcophagus has been relocated and here is where Saturn Girl is waiting.  They give her the bad news.

 

Early in the Legion’s formation, Saturn Girl had pledged to never use her super-power of telepathy to intrude on the privacy of her fellow members’ thoughts.  In her grief at Mon-El’s failure, however, her self-control slips, and she is startled by the stray thought she has picked up from Mon.  Incredibly, Mon-El does know a way of restoring Lightning Lad!

 

When she attempts to read his mind directly, Saturn Girl finds that Mon is shielding his thoughts, preventing her from confirming what she detected or finding out why he lied.

 

 

Confronted with the hard reality that her brother isn’t coming back, Lightning Lass weeps uncontrollably over his coffin.   WIth two sobbing females on his hands, Superboy, ever the softie, issues a stirring challenge.

 

“We’ve often accomplished feats that were considered impossible when others asked us!  Now we’re going to do something for our own lost comrade . . . we’ll find a way to revive Lightning Lad!”

 

Like a losing football team pumped up by its coach’s half-time pep talk, the Legionnaires rally around the Boy of Steel.  “Superboy’s right!” says Saturn Girl.  “We’ll search the whole universe, if necessary, to find the way!”

 

The first step is to run a Google-search on the Legion’s “mechanical-librarian” computer, collecting several hits on the topic “revival of life”.  Narrowing it down to a handful of the most likely possibilities, Our Heroes split up into small sub-teams to check them out.  A suspicious Saturn Girl ensures that she’s paired up with Mon-El.

 

The Legionnaires give it their best shot.  The blue sun of Galaxy AB-213.  The legend of the undying Taroc creature.  The radium-capsule of Skor.  All methods advertised to raise the dead---and each one of them has a hitch which makes it useless in restoring Lightning Lad.  Worse yet, in his frustration, Mon-El’s guard slips and Saturn Girl catches another “glimpse” of his thoughts.

 

Mon-El could revive Lightning Lad right now---but doesn’t want to!

 

She’s had enough of this.  She tricks Mon-El into taking her to Daxam, where one of that world’s physicians inadvertently spills the beans.  Saturn Girl demands the whole truth and Mon agrees to admit all.

 

Summoning all of the other Legionnaires involved back to Lightning Lad’s resting place on the lightning world, Mon-El reveals the information that he’s been hiding.

 

The biologists of Daxam had, indeed, devised a method for returning life to the dead.  A unique conductor is attached to the dead subject and a live person.  This conductor is of a sophisticated and complex design.  When the living person is struck with a sufficient jolt of electricity, his life-force will transfer, via the conductor, into the dead subject, making him live, again.

 

But such a miracle comes with a terrible cost.  The donor whose life-force is used dies!

 

As soon as he’d been able to sneak away, Mon-El had intended to secretly use the device himself, to sacrifice his own life-force to revive Lightning Lad.  And, yes, the conductor will suck the life out of super-beings such as himself or Superboy just as completely as it will out of regular folks.

 

Naturally, being Legionnaires, everyone present volunteers to trade his life for Lightning Lad’s.

 

 

They decide that the only fair way is for all of them to have an equal chance.  Each Legionnaire grips a conductor running to the body of their fallen comrade and holds a steel rod up in the air.  The lightning bolts eternally crashing overhead will provide the power.  It’s a grim and deadly lottery, with the “winner” being the one whose rod is the first to be struck by a bolt.

 

Yet, one Legionnaire, Saturn Girl, is determined to make the sacrifice.  Unknown to her fellow Legionnaires, she holds a rod made of duralim---an element which actually attracts lightning.  She’s doctored the rod to make it look like the steel ones held by the others.

 

For several tense minutes, the six Legionnaires stand, rods held high, over Lightning Lad’s lifeless form, waiting for fate to choose.  Then, a burst of lightning strikes Saturn Girl’s duralim rod!

 

It turns out that it is not Saturn Girl’s time to die---as determined as she was to die for Lightning Lad, there was someone even more determined that she live.  Instead, Chameleon Boy’s shape-changing pet, Proty, lured Saturn Girl away then took her place.  The Legionnaires discover this when, in death, the little protoplasmic creature reverts to its true blobby, yellow form.

 

The good news is---Lightning Lad lives again!  It is a bittersweet occasion of joy and loss, as the resurrected hero retakes his place in the Legion.

 

Oh, and that “killing Zaryan the Conqueror” thing?  Nobody brings it up throughout the rest of the series.  Ever.

 

 

 

CONCLUSIONS.

 

 

As to the real-life, behind-the-scenes reason that the Legion was never seen to address the question of Lightning Lad’s hand in the death of Zaryan, I’m tempted to guess that it was because Mort Weisinger and his writers never thought of it.  But that rather short-changes them.  More than any other series produced by DC, the Legion of Super-Heroes took many of its elements and developments from suggestions by its fans, and you can bet that Mort paid attention to the Adventure Comics mail that came over his transom.

 

Weisinger also had an advantage.  DC’s top-tier super-team title, Justice League of America, featured characters who were stars of their own magazines or series.  Thus, JLA writer Gardner Fox was hogtied when it came to introducing any developments in the book that would have an impact on the heroes in their parent titles.

 

But, except for a few of the characters---principally Superboy and Supergirl---no such restriction bound the Legion.  That gave Mort’s staff the latitude to impose permanent, life-altering changes on the various members.  As the writers got their sea legs, more disaster would be imposed on the Legionnaires.  Featured players would suffer death and dismemberment, lose their super-powers, or find themselves kicked out of the club.

 

So, while the idea of writing a story behind Lightning Lad’s killing of a foe might not have occurred to Mort and company immediately, it would have eventually.  Especially when, as discussed below, at least one reader had written in, pointing out Lightning Lad’s apparent violation of the Legion code.

 

The problem for Weisinger here was Lightning Lad was one of the few Legionnaires who couldn’t be tinkered with too much.  Several earlier stories had established that Lightning Lad would grow up to be Lightning Man and still solidly a member of the Legion.  And as the letters from Todd Walters and Steven Gerstein and Caroline Dove had shown, Legion fans possessed impeccable memories.  Mort knew that any story involving court-martialing Lightning Lad for the death of Zaryan would not have any lasting impact.  Should L.L. be convicted and expelled, the Adult Legion appearances had established that it would eventually be undone.

 

I suspect that Weisinger did like the idea of examining the consequences to a Legionnaire who killed.  However, when it came time to write a story around it, the central character turned out to be Star Boy, whose future life was unwritten.

 

 

As to the matter of providing an in-fiction explanation for the Legion’s failure to take action against Lightning Lad, after he had been restored to life . . . well, that is the purpose of my one-man review board.

 

Once Lightning Lad was revived and returned to duty with the Legion, he was subject to the club’s rules and regulations.  In this unique case, death had been only a delay to the club’s procedures.

 

After a consideration of all the evidence and testimony, I conclude that the Legion of Super-Heroes failed to pursue the matter of Lightning Lad’s possible violation of the Legion code for one or more of the following reasons:

 

 

 

1.  The Legion Code against killing did not apply.

 

 

There is no direct evidence that Zaryan the Conqueror was killed in Lightning Lad’s assault on the villain’s space-cruiser.  Zaryan’s death was not shown “on panel”, nor was his body shown afterward.

 

True, the level of destruction to Zaryan’s ship, as seen in the single panel showing Lightning Lad’s actual assault, makes it highly unlikely that Zaryan survived.  But, remember, we are dealing with thirtieth-century technologies, some of them alien to Earth.  One-man survival pods, personal protective force-fields, even teleportation, are all within the scope of futuristic technology and were seen in other Legion stories.

 

The sole witness to the incident, Saturn Girl, immediately departed that area of space, understandably, to rush the injured Lightning Lad to Earth and possible medical aid.  But as a consequence, no-one remained to inspect the wreckage of Zaryan’s spacecraft and check for either survivors or victims. 

 

Quite possibly, the Legion took the concept of habeas corpus at its literal meaning---“that you have the body.”  Without clear indication that Zaryan had died, perhaps it chose not to accuse Lightning Lad of violating the Legion code.

 

 

 

2.  Even if Zaryan had died, Lightning Lad did not violate the Legion code against killing.

 

 

This one is a bit tricky because it involves a precedent not yet set at the time Lightning Lad was restored to life.  That is the matter of Star Boy’s court-martial and expulsion from the Legion after he caused the death of Kenz Nuhor in “The Legionnaire Who Killed”, from Adventure Comics # 342 (Mar., 1966).

 

A quandary in the substance of the Legion code against killing resulted from this story.  It’s best looked at in chronological order.

 

The Smallville Mailsack of Adventure Comics # 316 (Jan., 1964) published a letter from Barney Palmatier, of Santa Monica, California.  Mr. Palmatier wrote in, raising the question forty-eight years before Commando Cody did:

 

 I see that you have brought Lightning Lad back to life, for which we are all grateful.  But when Zaryan the Conqueror’s ship was destroyed by Lightning Lad, Zaryan was also destroyed.  Therefore, since it is against the code of the Legionnaires to destroy life, he should be expelled from the Legion.  Right?

 

 

To this, Mort replied:

 

It is against the code to destroy life ruthlessly or in a wanton manner.  It is not against the code to destroy life in self-defense . . . Lightning Lad gave up his life to stop a diabolical villain.  He deserves nothing but praise for his heroic deed.

 

An eminently reasonable explanation, one that would have made my Deck Log Entries on this subject unnecessary---except for the matter of “The Legionnaire Who Killed”, which came along two years later.

 

One of the key issues raised during Star Boy’s court-martial was the matter of self-defense.  As presented here, the Legion code against killing did not provide for the right to self-defense.  It was a violation of the code for a Legionnaire to kill---period.

 

This lack of a self-defense provision is the reason why Superboy volunteered to defend Star Boy from the charges.  He, along with the other invulnerable Legionnaires, believed that their fellow members should have the right to kill to prevent their own deaths.  The Boy of Steel’s efforts to exonerate Star Boy concentrated on demonstrating why a self-defense proviso was a needed thing.

 

Ultimately, he even persuaded the prosecutor, Brainiac 5, of this.  However, it didn’t stop the court-martial from going forward.  Star Boy had violated the Legion code as it currently existed---without the right to self-defense.  In the end, the lad from Xanthu was found guilty and kicked out of the Legion.

 

Yet, this was clearly a contradiction of Mort Weisinger’s earlier claim that the Legion code did permit Legionnaires to kill, if necessary to save their own lives.  By now, he should have known that the hard-core Legion mavens would jump on that.  At least one did---Alan Anderson, of St. Petersburg, Florida.  His indignant letter appeared in Adventure Comics # 345 (Jun., 1966):

 

You’ve finally gone and done it!  Your latest story, “The Legionnaire Who Killed,” simply has no basis.  In your January, 1964 letter column, you stated:  “It is against the code to destroy life ruthlessly, or in a wanton manner.  It is not against the code to destroy life in self-defense.”  Admit, you blew it!

 

With his own words hurled back at him, Mort could only offer a mea culpa and weakly argue that it didn’t matter, anyway:

 

True, we forgot about that provision in the code.  But Brainiac 5 proved that Star Boy could have used his power to beat the killer without doing him in.  So the expulsion still stands.

 

This is the kind of thing that gives loyal series fans fits.  Devotees of Sherlock Holmes have applied contorted trains of thought into justifying how many wives Doctor Watson had or to his war wound, cited variously as in the shoulder or the leg.  The same could be said for die-hard Legion-lovers and the matter of the Legion code providing an exception for self-defense.  Fan sites have debated it for years.

 

Which is why I find the last of the possible reasons the most compelling . . . .

 

 

 

3.  As they did often, the Legionnaires ignored their own rules.

 

 

It’s been discussed here before that, as much as the Legionnaires presented themselves as responsible and adult, they were still only teen-agers, on the cusp of maturity.  So many of their actions were based on the whims and superficial concerns of adolescents.  Our own Randy Jackson has raised this point a few times.

 

Many times in the Legion series, the symptoms of “teenage-itis” poke through their veneer of maturity.

 

You have the hair-trigger emotional responses.  In “The Stolen Super-Powers”, the other Legionnaires are so chaffed by Saturn Girl’s behaviour that, at the mere mention of Zaryan, they immediately jump to the conclusion that she is in league with the criminal.  During the events of “The Legionnaires’ Super-Sacrifice”, Saturn Girl believes that Mon-El is withholding his knowledge because he is jealous of Lightning Lad.

 

Not only are they insecure about each other, but like all teens, they are insecure about themselves.  In “The Fantastic Spy”, the secret details of Legion operations are being leaked to criminals.  Immediately, thoughts turn to the possibility of a traitor in the organisation, but no fingers have been pointed.  That doesn’t keep Matter-Eater Lad from worrying about his status with the group.

 

“Since I’m the newest member,” he says, “and my loyalty hasn’t been proven yet, I---I can’t help feeling you veteran Legionnaires suspect me!

 

Perhaps part of M-E Lad’s insecurity comes from his awareness that his super-power is a pretty lame one, by Legion standards.  To be sure, the most obvious examples of the Legionnaires’ cliquishness and adolescent thinking appear in their membership-offering.

 

Many times, the Legion seems to have accepted new members on the basis of personality alone.  The events of “The Secret Origin of Bouncing Boy” scarcely justify his induction into the Legion.  He gets in because he’s the funny fat kid.  The Legionnaires admit it themselves when B.B. is left behind “to guard the ship” in “The Legion of Super-Monsters”.  Once he is out of earshot, his buddies admit that their plump pal is jolly and they like him, but his power of super-bouncing doesn’t help much on missions.

 

On the other hand, Polar Boy, whose power of super-cold clearly would be of benefit, is rejected.  Polar Boy meets all of the qualifications for Legion membership; he’s also noticeably smaller, and probably younger, than the Legionnaires.  To them, it would be like having one’s kid brother tagging along.  So he’s shown the door on the flimsiest of excuses.  (“It might . . . disable us at a critical moment!”)

 

Even Star Boy’s court-martial saw some cracks in the Legionnaires’ official deportment.  During the vote for verdict, all of the female Legionnaires---except Saturn Girl---voted for Star Boy’s acquittal out of sentiment for his romance with Dream Girl.  It wasn’t the first time Dream Girl was responsible for the teens voting with their hormones.  Back in Adventure Comics # 317 (Feb., 1964), Dreamy was admitted to the Legion, the girl Legionnaires outvoted by the boys, responding to the blood rushing out of their brains.

 

While they played at being adults, the Legionnaires all too often displayed their immaturity by letting their impulsive emotions override their own policies.

 

 

The failure to indict Lighting Lad for the death of Zaryan might have been simply one more example of the cliquish Legionnaires giving into their adolescent whims.

 

Not all of them.  Cosmic Boy was certainly a hard-liner, as seen by his insistence that L.L. be expelled for losing his super-power, as he believed, back in “The Return of Lightning Lad”.  On his home world of Braal, its people were considered adults at fourteen---probably owing to a faster maturity rate---and Cos had been the first Legion leader.   He understood the tremendous responsibility of being a Legionnaire.

 

Notably, Cosmic Boy was absent during the events which saw Lightning Lad return to life.  Without his influence, the issue of Zaryan’s death wasn’t raised.  Nor was it likely to be, given that the Legion members who were there for Lightning Lad's revival included Lightning Lass (his sister), Sun Boy (his best friend), and Superboy (who believed that the Legionnaires should have the right to kill in self-defense).

 

And then there was Saturn Girl, whom Legion fans had already pegged as Lightning Lad’s girl friend, based on the fact that Action Comics # 289 (Jun., 1962) had shown them married, as adults.  Moreover, she was the current leader of the team.  Any move to prosecute Lightning Lad would have to get past her. 

 

The other Legionnaires still had fresh memories of their experience with Saturn Girl as a tyrant.  They were probably more than glad to let the matter of Lightning Lad’s violation slide, rather than see the return of “Imra, the She-Wolf from Hell”.

 

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Comment by Commander Benson on October 12, 2012 at 2:25pm

"I would submit that we do exclude animals on the basis of intelligence."

Fair enough, friend. The thing is, nothing which you stated goes to that argument.

". . . in many instances where protection is needed, there is no time to conduct an intelligence test to see if the person is 'worthy' of being protected."

True enough, but how does that apply to your postulate that society rates human beings as inherently a higher class than animals on the basis of animals' relatively lower intelligence? You're simply stating that, under emergent conditions, there is no time to gauge a potential victim's intellect---and I agree.

"I would also point out that there are claims (which I'm not qualified to judge the truth of) of cultures that do not protect their most helpless members, especially in times of famine or extreme hazards. I've heard of cultures that practice infanticide, and there are also the stories of the weak and elderly being abandoned by nomadic cultures.

"There is also the example of Nazi Germany where a deliberate effort to 'cull' persons that were thought to be inferior or defective."

Again, certainly all true statements. But again, these examples don't address the relative intelligence between humans and animals

Furthermore, they don't even address the issue of relative intelligence among humans. In those societies which expunge infants and/or the elderly, weak, and infirm usually only do so in times when resources are scarce. (Which, for some of these cultures, may be nearly all of the time.) Thus, infants and/or the elderly, weak, and infirm are sacrificed because they are perceived to be unable to carry their weight within the tribe. They consume precious resources but do not contribute to the tribe's survival. None of this has to do with the sacrificed individuals' intelligence. It's a matter of their physical impairment or inability.

In the matter of the Nazis' systematic removal of the Jews, perhaps there, one might make a case that the Nazis' perceived differential in the relative intelligence between the "Master Race" and the Jewish people held that the Jews were mentally inferior, but that would only be one element of the Nazi-held ideology that Jews (along with homosexuals, Gypsies, and certain other non-Aryans) were an inferior sub-culture overall.

It's really quite simple---imagine yourself a judge, and on one side of the courtroom is an adult male who was born with significant brain impairment and is capable of only brain-stem responses. The EKG's and medical reports confirm this man has no cognizent sentience.

On the other side of the courtroom is Koko the gorilla.

Do you hold the man in this scenario as a higher form of life, entitled to superior protections of the law and treatment in society, than you do the gorilla? And if so, why? Because it's certainly not because of the man's greater intelligence.

True, I am not talking about the great minds of man---the Einsteins, the Jeffersons, the da Vincis. But, in counterbalance, I am also not talking about the vast numbers of animal species who clearly do not exhibit even the rudimentaries of advanced and abstract thought. These animals are lowly creatures and do not rate a higher consideration by society.

But there is a point where the least intelligent of man drops below the highest intelligence of some animals. In these situations, such humans are still considered socially superior to such animals, and the reason for that, whatever it may be, is not based on relative intelligence.

"I've used this thought experiment before, except my offered choices were an unconscious adult and multiple fertilized eggs in a traveling container."

If this is all that is given, with no additional information on the adult, then this is a no-brainer: you save the adult.

Comment by Kirk G on February 9, 2013 at 4:28pm

Somehow, it's really creepy for the Legion to have a statue or stuffed body of Proty I on display, and for them to refer to Proty II as their new pet.  I mean, really creepy as in crude, sexual inuendo type disgusting creepy, if you know what I mean...(nudge, nudge, wink, wink)

 

By the way Commander, I'm wondering what impact this storyline had on the fledgeling Jim Shooter who decreed that because Dark Phoenix had eaten/destroyed an entire living planet of asparagus people, that she had to pay the price....(die?!)   Do you think this controversy stuck in his brain?

Comment by Commander Benson on February 10, 2013 at 5:56am

". . .  I'm wondering what impact this storyline had on the fledgeling Jim Shooter who decreed that because Dark Phoenix had eaten/destroyed an entire living planet of asparagus people, that she had to pay the price....(die?!)   Do you think this controversy stuck in his brain?"

Possibly.  Not knowing the man, I have no way of determining what forms his opinions.  I would, however, point out that there is significant difference between the death caused by Lightning Lad and the mass murders committed by Jean Gray.

 

Lightning Lad killed Zaryan in defence of the Earth.  That falls well within the "innocent third party" requirement of self-defence. 

 

Jean Gray, on the other hand, willfully---perhaps without malice, but indeed willfully---caused the deaths of millions of D'bari when she extinguished that planet's sun.  There was no issue of self-defence or survival involved.  She did it because she wanted to do so.

 

First, let's get the caveat in, because someone will surely bring it up, if I don't.  Yes, I know that a later revision, in Fantastic Four # 286 (Jan., 1986), changed things, so that it wasn't the real Marvel Girl who destroyed the D'bari.  Rather, it was the Phoenix Force in Jean's image and believing itself to be Jean.  However, that was an after-the-fact revision.

 

At the time Jim Shooter handed down his editorial decision as to the fate of Jean Gray, it was Jean who did the foul deed.

 

And I agree with his viewpoint.  You cannot have a character---super-heroine, notwithstanding---knowingly and wantonly kill millions of innocents and permit her, at the end of the story, to walk away without paying for her crime.  No matter how really, really sorry she is.

 

And, yes, Jean committed her heinous crime willfully.  She had willingly allowed herself to be corrupted by the staggering power she possessed as Phoenix.  She gave in to its lure.  She could have not done it; she just chose not to.

 

More sympathetic readers would insist that Jean was mind-controlled by the darkside of the Phoenix Force.  That doesn't hold water.  All of us possess some amount of greed and selfishness.  Most of us hold it in check, at least to the point where we don't seriously injure others by it.  On the other hand, Bernard Madoff indulged his greed and selfishness to the point where he caused the financial ruin of hundreds.

 

You don't hear anybody claiming Bernard Madoff was mind-controlled.  Because he wasn't---and neither was Jean Gray.  Jean gave in to the influence of her Phoenix power, just as Madoff gave in to the influence of his growing wealth.

 

So, yes, Jean Gray had to pay for her crimes with her own life.  It was a sound and proper determination on Shooter's part.  And it's quite possible that his memories of a Legionnaire killing---not so much Lightning Lad as, I think, Star Boy, whose killing of Kenz Nehor raised quite a stir---influenced him in a general sense.  The specifics of Jean's crime were not similar, but Shooter undoubtedly understood the moral conflict that would arise and the story drama that could be wrung from it.

 

Comment by Philip Portelli on February 10, 2013 at 8:47am

I recall the Phoenix controversy with people criticizing that Jean Grey was shown not being able to control her power while male heroes Thor, Doctor Strange and the Silver Surfer could. Despite all her training and discipline, Jean succumbed to her desires, not caring about the consequences until it was too late. Even the Hulk with his potential for mass murder was never that careless or cared less.

For what it's worth, I too agree with Jim Shooter's edict. Claremont and Bryne's original storyline lets her get away with genocide. They wanted the drama of Uncanny X-Men #137 but forget the horror of it. After the D'Bari were "just" asparagus people!

Comment by Commander Benson on February 10, 2013 at 10:05am

"I recall the Phoenix controversy with people criticizing that Jean Grey was shown not being able to control her power while male heroes Thor, Doctor Strange and the Silver Surfer could."

Curiously, I don't remember that particular complaint, though it doesn't surprise me.  There are folks who scream "sexism" (or some other kind of --ism) at every perceived slight.  There are probably those who yell it is sexist and part of male oppression that man comes before woman in the dictionary.  All such picayunity undermines the attention that should be paid to legitmate instances of unfairness against females.

 

In the case of Jean Gray, there was a significant difference and it wasn't her sex.  The other mega-powerful characters you mentioned---Thor and Doctor Strange and the Silver Surfer and the Hulk were all headliners, the stars of their own respective series.  You couldn't very well have them lose control of their powers, commit mass murder, then kill them off.  At least, not as long as their series made money for Marvel.

 

Jean Gray, on the other hand, was part of an ensemble cast.  Players in an ensemble are always more expendable.  That's the downside that goes along with having more latitude for character development.  That was the primary factor that led to her being in that situation (as opposed to Thor, the Hulk, et. al.).

 

It's also important to remember that sometimes storylines "write themselves."   Claremont and Byrne's intention in upgrading Marvel Girl to Phoenix was to make her a more-powerful member of the X-Men, and from there, examine what would happen if her newfound abilities became too powerful to contain.  I can't see any other way Claremont and Byrne could have told the same story using a different X-Man without short-changing Jean.

 

If they had chosen to boost a male X-Man's power and examine his problems in controlling it, then Marvel Girl would have remained at the lower power-level that Claremont and Byrne did not like.  (Personally, I don't see it; telekinesis is a pretty impressive power, and certainly on a par with, say, the Angel's.  But that's what C & B felt.)

 

From what I've read, C & B's orignal ending saw Jean being subjected to a "psychic lobotomy" which would have removed all of her Phoenix-spawned powers and her telekinesis and her mild telepathy, making her a normal human.  You can imagine the charges of sexism that would have accompanied that.  So could C & B, so undoubtedly, at some point, the plotline would have lead to Jean regaining her powers to a degree (probably powerful enough to be a big gun, but less than what she had when she was out destroying starships and snuffing out suns).

 

Had the plotline been able to play out to that conclusion, then Jean's loss of control of her power would have been viewed as nothing more than a plot device to get the story from A to Z, and ultimately leaving her much more powerful than she was as Marvel Girl.

 

Unfortunately, there was that ol' "mass-murder" thing that got in the way.  Shooter's edict that Jean had to pay for her crimes with her own life meant that the originally intended plotline got interrupted halfway through.  It never got the chance to end with a more-powerful Jean in control of her powers.  (That had to be arranged later, via the revision appearing in Fantastic Four # 286.)

 

It's funny that you mention---sarcastically, of course---that the D'bari were "just" asparagus people.

 

If one is a comic-book fan, then he most certainly will come across panels so striking, so memorable, that they stay in his mind for years, even decades, afterward.

 

For me, one of these was the panel from X-Men # 135 (Jul., 1980), showing the doomed D'bari on their homeworld at the moment their sun is extinguished:

 

 

By some strange confluence of art and text, this panel has always resonated with me.  They may be aliens, but their imminent deaths seemed as tragic as if they had been normal humans.  Especially the child clutching his mother in fear.  Here, Claremont and Byrne palpably depicted the humanity of people who just happened not to look like us.  Since then, I've never been able to quite think of them as "asparagus people".

 

Yeah, Jean Gray had to pay for that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Comment by Philip Portelli on February 10, 2013 at 12:34pm

That late 70s to mid 80s period was weird when it came to Women Super-Heroes at Marvel. I may be fudging with the dates but as I recall:

  • Storm had her "Dark Storm" moment, changed her look and attitude and had her powers removed.
  • The Scarlet Witch's power increased as well but John Bryne drove her nuts years before Brian Michael Bendis did.
  • She-Hulk arrived though as much grimmer character than what she evolved into.
  • Spider-Woman and Ms. Marvel had their powers removed.
  • Captain Marvel II debuted but she was never allowed to fulfill her potential.
  • Marinna from Alpha Flight was apparently created just to go crazy!

It's hard to justify all that!

Comment by Richard Willis on February 10, 2013 at 12:53pm

Jim Shooter handed down his editorial decision as to the fate of Jean Gray

Who was the editor at the time of the mass murder? It seems to me that a lot of the so-called editors let characters be killed or committ irredeemable acts when maybe they should have called for a rewrite.

And, yes, Jean committed her heinous crime willfully. She had willingly allowed herself to be corrupted by the staggering power she possessed as Phoenix. She gave in to its lure. She could have not done it; she just chose not to.

This is similar to the legal standard for crimes committed by people on alcohol, angel dust, meth, etc. You are responsible because you gave in to something you knew or should have known was dangerous and have to live with the consequences.

Comment by Commander Benson on February 10, 2013 at 4:35pm

"That late 70s to mid 80s period was weird when it came to Women Super-Heroes at Marvel. I may be fudging with the dates but as I recall:

  • Storm had her "Dark Storm" moment, changed her look and attitude and had her powers removed.
  • The Scarlet Witch's power increased as well but John Bryne drove her nuts years before Brian Michael Bendis did.
  • She-Hulk arrived though as much grimmer character than what she evolved into.
  • Spider-Woman and Ms. Marvel had their powers removed.
  • Captain Marvel II debuted but she was never allowed to fulfill her potential.
  • Marinna from Alpha Flight was apparently created just to go crazy!

"It's hard to justify all that!"

 

It only needs to be justified, Philip, if it demonstrates a distinct bias in the treatment of female characters.

 

Taking that same time-frame (roughly, as you did), let's see . . . .

 

     ■  The Thing lost his powers (Fantastic Four # 167 [Feb., 1976]) for an extended period of time.  Yes, he regained them, but so did Spider-Woman and Ms. Marvel got new ones.

 

     ■  Tony Stark became an alcoholic and sent down the road to ruin for an extended sequence, starting in Iron Man # 127 (Oct.,  1979).  After Stark regained his sobriety, he was sent into another lengthy alcoholic decline, starting in Iron Man # 166 (Jan., 1983).

 

     ■  Henry Pym was dragged through the mud, beginning with The Avengers # 195 (May, 1980), suffering a mental breakdown, then was totally disgraced and sent to prison---a period that lasted for three years, real-time.

 

     ■  Captain Marvel II may not have been used to her full potential, but her predecessor, Mar-Vell, was killed off, in the Death of Captain Marvel graphic novel (1982).

 

     ■  The Hulk was devolved from having being temperamental with a childlike intelligence to a creature of bestial savagery with no intellect, beginning in The Incredible Hulk # 299 (Sep., 1984), and he stayed that way for over a year.

 

     ■  Quicksilver turned villainous, in West Coast Avengers Annual # 1 (1986) and stayed that way for a year. 

 

     ■  Steve Rogers was stripped of his Captain America identity for an extended period, starting in Captain America #  332 (Aug., 1987).

 

      ■  Doctor Druid was mind-controlled into becoming a villain, beginning with The Avengers # 292 (Jun., 1988).

 

Furthermore, during the early 1980's, the female characters of the Invisible Girl and the Wasp became more forceful, more capable heroines.

 

So, looking at both demographics, rather than isolating the handling of one sex, I don't see that the female characters were given any worse treatment than the males.

 

Comment by ClarkKent_DC on March 27, 2013 at 9:43am

Richard Willis said:

Jim Shooter handed down his editorial decision as to the fate of Jean Gray

Who was the editor at the time of the mass murder? It seems to me that a lot of the so-called editors let characters be killed or committ irredeemable acts when maybe they should have called for a rewrite.

 

I don't recall who was the editor, but as I recall, X-Men #135 had already been printed and sold to readers when Jim Shooter stepped in and said "Hey, what's going on here?"

I also recall reading somewhere that the scene with the doomed D'bari in X-Men #135 wasn't in the script, that John Byrne threw that in during the drawing stage, remembering the D'bari's one appearance in an old issue of Fantastic Four.

So, yes, the sacrifice of Jean Grey was wholly avoidable, had the writer, artist and editor(s) thought a bit more about what was being presented and acted before things were published.

Comment by Philip Portelli on March 27, 2013 at 10:52am

IIRC, Claremont and Byrne's rationale for the redemption of Jean Grey was that in their planned Uncanny X-Men #150, Magneto would (somehow) offer Jean the power of the Phoenix again and she would refuse, thus proving herself a true hero. I'm not sure if she wouldn't at least regain her Marvel Girl abilities. So her losing her powers and being forced to be "normal" would have only lasted twelve issues or a couple of months "Comicbook time".

I still believe that Jim Shooter was right. Destroying an entire planet is not a plotpoint. There had to be repercussions. But Claremont and Byrne cared about the character so much, they never considered that. As I said, their attitude (and of some fans) were, "Hey, they were asparagus people."

Byrne continued this "Genocide is OK, if they're aliens" bit when Galactus devoured the Skrull Homeworld in Fantastic Four, including the peaceful Princess Anelle. Since Reed Richards had previously saved Galactus' life, he was put on trial as an accessory to the massacre. Bryne then ponticated some pseudo-philosophy that Galactus has a purpose in the universe, so get over it!

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